Loved the clock, loved the look and it was everything that it said in the description except that the clock didn’t work. Very disappointed – don’t know if it was the shipping – but was well packed – can’t fault them on anything else.
I need a name and opinions pretty please?
Hi all, so I would love opinions on this short start to my story – it is a rough draft at the moment so please ignore the grammar mistakes – also please be honest.Twigs snapped beneath my feet as I ran towards the cemetery gates. I knew someone or something was chasing me but I wasn’t going to hang around and find out. I could feel the evil all around me and I was surprised at how fast my feet actually moved considering I had six-inch heels on. It had been following me for weeks now – and wasn’t going to stop until it got what it wanted.The gates became closer and closer and my hand stretched out to push them open. If I only made it past the large black wrought iron enclosures, it wouldn’t be able to get me I was almost sure of it. I was almost there and safe when I was suddenly pulled to the side. Tumbling into the large bushes that surround the red stone path’s edge, I screamed in the hope someone would hear me. He lifted his index finger to my mouth and told me, “Be quiet” before I passed out.Chapter 1I had been dreading this day for months now. Monday the 1st Large Wrought of September was now my personal nightmare. Being part of the school’s head council duty was to put together all the school dances. Halloween was our next one and no one was willing to help. Sure, our town was big on Halloween – it was one of our favourite holidays here in Salem but most of the students here were only willing to help with the school dance when it was prom. Therefore, I was struggling to gather a group to help me out to decide on a theme. Lucky for me Alex – my best friend for the last 17 years – was due back from her aunt’s house in Boston today.Alex and I had grown up together. Her mother and my own were best friends back at school and had managed to fall pregnant at the same time. Freaky I know. We went to kinder garden together, bought our first bra together, and even managed to get our first job together. However, a few months ago, Alex’s mom had sadly passed away and her father dragged her away to his sisters to ‘heal’. He never really understood what was going on in Alex’s head; she wanted to stay at home. She felt closer to her mom here; she wanted to feel like everything was normal by going to school and trying to get on with normality but he said she was acting strange and needed help so he packed her bags and shipped her off. I hated Alex’s dad. He was never around to even notice her before Susan passed. He was always ‘working’ or so he said. Alex and I had caught him one night sneaking off to a motel with his receptionist but he never knew. Now, he was trying to act as if he was doing well by her. I suppose he was better than my own dad was. I mean, anyone could be better than he could. I hadn’t seen him since I was two – since he went to the shop for mom and never came back. Ok that’s it – now I need help on picking a name for my main character. I love short quirky names.She is female obviously – lol – 5ft 4inch, long cooper straight hair, 17 years old, hazel eyes, not the most popular girl in school but not a geek either just inbetween. Nice natural looking – not stunning but not ugly. Olive skin colour. So if you can think of a name – please let me know!ThanksEdit – I was thinking for names – Autumn, Faith, Skye, Rayne, Evie, Willow, Which one do you like best?
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Hi all, so I would love opinions on this short start to my story – it is a rough draft at the moment so please ignore the grammar mistakes – also please be honest.Twigs snapped beneath my feet as I ran towards the cemetery gates. I knew someone or something was chasing me but I wasn’t going to hang around and find out. I could feel the evil all around me and I was surprised at how fast my feet actually moved considering I had six-inch heels on. It had been following me for weeks now – and wasn’t going to stop until it got what it wanted.The gates became closer and closer and my hand stretched out to push them open. If I only made it past the large black wrought iron enclosures, it wouldn’t be able to get me I was almost sure of it. I was almost there and safe when I was suddenly pulled to the side. Tumbling into the large bushes that surround the red stone path’s edge, I screamed in the hope someone would hear me. He lifted his index finger to my mouth and told me, “Be quiet” before I passed out.Chapter 1I had been dreading this day for months now. Monday the 1st Large Wrought of September was now my personal nightmare. Being part of the school’s head council duty was to put together all the school dances. Halloween was our next one and no one was willing to help. Sure, our town was big on Halloween – it was one of our favourite holidays here in Salem but most of the students here were only willing to help with the school dance when it was prom. Therefore, I was struggling to gather a group to help me out to decide on a theme. Lucky for me Alex – my best friend for the last 17 years – was due back from her aunt’s house in Boston today.Alex and I had grown up together. Her mother and my own were best friends back at school and had managed to fall pregnant at the same time. Freaky I know. We went to kinder garden together, bought our first bra together, and even managed to get our first job together. However, a few months ago, Alex’s mom had sadly passed away and her father dragged her away to his sisters to ‘heal’. He never really understood what was going on in Alex’s head; she wanted to stay at home. She felt closer to her mom here; she wanted to feel like everything was normal by going to school and trying to get on with normality but he said she was acting strange and needed help so he packed her bags and shipped her off. I hated Alex’s dad. He was never around to even notice her before Susan passed. He was always ‘working’ or so he said. Alex and I had caught him one night sneaking off to a motel with his receptionist but he never knew. Now, he was trying to act as if he was doing well by her. I suppose he was better than my own dad was. I mean, anyone could be better than he could. I hadn’t seen him since I was two – since he went to the shop for mom and never came back. Ok that’s it – now I need help on picking a name for my main character. I love short quirky names.She is female obviously – lol – 5ft 4inch, long cooper straight hair, 17 years old, hazel eyes, not the most popular girl in school but not a geek either just inbetween. Nice natural looking – not stunning but not ugly. Olive skin colour. So if you can think of a name – please let me know!ThanksEdit – I was thinking for names – Autumn, Faith, Skye, Rayne, Evie, Willow, Which one do you like best?
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